Getting better but still not good enough, should open pussy more show cum on pussy lick nipples more use 2 dildo on up her ass and bigger one in her pussy,
Get her gf to join her for some fun don't just keep those videos for the people who pay let everyone see how fuking good you can be.

Dear Leora,
that was not bad at all, it was quite good
Unfortunately, you didn't open your pussy enough at the right positions.
Would love to jump into the screen and show you how good it is if you do it right.
And finally ..... don't smear your juice in your panties. Eat and lick and swallow.
You like to have something in your ass. But then 2 fingers have to work deep in your pussy. Then there is a real explosion.
Still good
greetings Uwe

Not forget your nipples and titts. Sorry